Thursday, February 21, 2008

It is done

I've finally done it. I entered a competition. While I'm sure that I will be rejected in the most embarrassing fashion, truly, the fact that I did this much should be celebrated. They said a poem of any length, so I entered two short poems and one 800 word poem. Besides the poem I posted earlier, I entered:

--
Whither Thither

A man had fumbled with his life
From his early days of strife
He attempted once to make with peace
A life of bliss beneath the trees
Something missing, he so thought
And left half built what he should not
Have ever had even started
And so his life’s attempt was parted.
He began a journey here, and ended
With his efforts all but mended.

Upon the ground which made his step
Was somewhere he had for been wept
Perhaps by a lover or his mother past
He couldn’t remember. He moved fast
Away to new locations, and
His latest soil destination: sand.
He called this beach his home until
Upon his makeshift windowsill
A bird came slowly and sang sickly
Telling him he must move quickly.

He left his quasi home alone,
And took his pack with him to roam.
He encountered many other birds,
But none who used such soft sick words
As his friend who recommended
That though he steals, this time was lended.
He met a wood, and on it’s edge
He stopped to make that night his bed
Was greeted by a gentle wolf,
Who said that here was soft enough.

That night, from his distrustful soul
He was not a single wink doled!
So left to his next journey’s travels
Tired, angry, and disheveled.
He moved clumsily through the wood
And near the strangest tree he stood
He thought he heard a whiffling sound
And knelt; his ear unto the ground.
While nothing seemed he beholding,
The ground itself to be revolting!

That tree next to which he rested
Seemed to want his courage tested
It failed the test, but not his legs
Which brought him far from anomalous dregs
Upon the far side of the wood he stopped,
And on his now sore legs he hopped
To a bush with sweetest berries
And while he gorged himself, saw fairies!
He had not seen such things post-natal,
And never thought they might be fatal.

They, taking airs of kind, exclaimed,
And when they had calmed down, explained:
He had eaten them of house and home,
Literally, this bush they owned
And lived inside their cherry castles
Which now remnants hung like tassels
From blood red lips, and teeth incarnadined!
Hearing this he wept, for it had seemed
He had so easily made hell for these,
And stolen from them solemn peace.

He begged them, through a wall of tears
To forgive him of his lack of fears
Of perfect bushes, and perfect berries!
They replied “We are but fairies,
“We cannot forgive your sins,
“And certainly no conscience win!”
He pressed though, and so they tried
But one by one they slowly died.
Feeling though it had worked out,
He now ceased his mouth to pout.

He stood again on weary limbs
And marched away with saintly hymns!
Neglectful of his somber deeds
He came upon a bed of reeds,
Nestled on a long stretched bank
Of a river of some worthy rank.
He followed this for quite some time
Forgetting all his past and crimes.
He came upon a great lake, and said
“What a perfect place to rest my head!”

When he awoke, what did he see?
But beauty standing before he!
In the middle of this bodied water
Was the most delightful daughter!
So he decided not to leave,
And of his journey was bereaved.
He sat and watched her days and weeks
So profound and yet so meek!
Composed sonnets to her in his head,
Always thought, but never said.

This continued for months and months
Till he had finally had enough
He waded from the river bank
Into the lake, in which he sank.
Upon reaching the lake’s deep bed saw
A tiny cabin, thatched with straw
In awe he stood, and watched as she
Entered here alone, as sad as she could be.
When he summoned himself to courage
He rapped the door of this sunken cottage.

She answered, and they stood in silence
As their eyes divided diamonds.
He entered and, when both were sat,
Slowly did remove his hat.
She took his hand, this total stranger
Of whom she felt no present danger.
He smiled, and raised his hand to touch
The face that he had seen so much!
When his fingers found her face,
He fell, to deepest slumber’s place!

Soon from the lake he did creep
And somnambulated, from the deep.
So what was said to him was thus:
"Awaken not in pains of lust
"But pains of joy and health receive,
“On merry nights such as this eve"
And when this temporal advice was wrought
He went and ambled back to cot.
This darling home beneath the lake,
There he his life, in sleep, did take.
--

AND

--
Stroke of the Twelve

The thunder rolls about the room, and falls on every ear,
Reverberates about this space, and strikes each heart with fear.
For now this lonely moment is a lonely thought, indeed,
As this wooden ground is shaken, as by a thousand steeds.
Each soul trembles, each heart stops, as if in contemplation,
Each tongue stilled, and each lung stiff, aware of reprobation.
With wicked eyes they look upon the faces that surround,
Hoping for a secret smile, all they can find are frowns.
No words are spoken; an attempt would surely fall to deaf,
As thunderous shakes remind them of mortality and death.
No comfort found within the crowd, some try to find without,
But those who leave with faith return with nothing more than doubt.
More severe than ever, tears form within our solemn crowd,
No longer filled with hope and trust, with only dread endowed.
They hang their heavy heads and weep, for friends are surely lost,
They’ve sown their seed, they’ve made their grave, and now they pay the cost.
I see it all; I cannot stop their tears, and not their pain.
‘Tis by their daring, foolish hearts that they are left disdained.
A single tear rolls down my cheek, as I now walk away,
Their tumble should be short, yes, for they’ve fallen all their days.
The air is still, the thunder stopped, and quiet is the floor,
But alas, that little group, we shall hear of them no more.
--

So there you have it. Cross you fingers!


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3 comments:

photoholly said...

Woohoo!!! You entered the competition!!! YAY!!! You write incredible poetry, but then again, I'm biased and I think I suck when it comes to writing, but I still want to do it. Good luck. Wow, 3 readers now too eh? How will you handle it?

Coach Keese said...

I am writing an article for you why alcohol is better than pop and does not need to be eliminated, and why does does. Nice poems by the way.
T

photoholly said...

Oh Dan, I do know how hard it is to tie your life in to another's. I have been "homesick" the whole time I've been married, and it's even harder to leave because we have Hayden to think about. I suggested to Mal that the two of you travel around a bit and see where you both feel most at home. You can always come back here if you don't have a better "fit" somewhere else. Hugs